Lady Pirate

Bonjour Or if I may be informal with you... Salut Your English is very good, but I would be happy to help you if you have any questions. I'm only ...

I agree with Kitty15, it is very well written. The lag vibe almost reminds me of a Shakespeare sonnet without the sonnet form. Just the tone when your talking about ...

Evil is never one sided, unless you are someone like Jack the Ripper, but then even he had a story didn't he. It is hard to create someone truely evil ...

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This is really good, I couldn't peel my eyes off the computer screen. I love the parallel with Salem and all those people dying during the Salem Witch Trails, it's ...

I like this, it is short, sweet, simple and to the point. I love the Shh at the beginning. It's almost as if, there is a lot of noise around ...

Hmm... never really thought about it like that. thanks Ed. Well, I'm now taking the poem down, so it can under MAJOR recontrutive writiting. Thanks for all the help you ...

Thanks of all of the advice :D It is most welcome. I'll defintly work on it, becuase I see it now that yous guys point it out to me! it ...

Thaks for the advise B.I. I'll work on it, I guess it sounds better when it's spoken...*rubbs chin* Question: Would it flow better if it where divided up into stanzas???

Now that I have all rash thought together, how did you even come across Dylan, I mean I've been listening to him for as long as I can remember, but ...

I don't know, I'm having the same problem! I even wrote a post about it, when you find out, let me know, PLEASE!

Yeah, well, it's been a year.... Last summer, I sent off my first Quary Letter to an Agent in New York. Since then I have been doing the same. Can ...

I'm in French Two too! Me and Night Mistress are in the same class. It's pretty cool!

You Know BOB DYLAN!!!!! I'm about to have a Stroke!!!!! YOU KNOE BOB DLYAN!!!!! AAAAHHHH, do you know how rare it is to come across somone who knows the Bob ...

This is lovely. It's very well written, and I love the symbolism of midnight, how night changes to day &c. And how you life changes at the stroke of midnight.